I love that you interweve some relevant bits of what Miren looks like (that she has a tail and horns) into the text at logical places instead of having her randomly encounter a mirror and then spend ten minutes pondering her own appearance (as too many fantasy novels do)
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- Sat Feb 28, 2026 7:56 pm
- Forum: Projects
- Topic: The Miren Discussion Thread
- Replies: 21
- Views: 312
- Sun Sep 21, 2025 7:45 pm
- Forum: Projects
- Topic: Nar's Fantasy Setting
- Replies: 8
- Views: 151
Re: Nar's Fantasy Setting
I think you posted the first scene in discord at some point.
I agree with Fawkes, you seem to have a good grasp of describing stuff but not too much so it becomes boring, more setting the environment. The prose keeps moving and is not repetitive.
Is this meant to be part of a short story or a ...
I agree with Fawkes, you seem to have a good grasp of describing stuff but not too much so it becomes boring, more setting the environment. The prose keeps moving and is not repetitive.
Is this meant to be part of a short story or a ...
- Thu Jul 31, 2025 7:44 pm
- Forum: Monthly Dev Log
- Topic: REKT Devlog: July 2025
- Replies: 5
- Views: 68
Re: REKT Devlog: July 2025
I didn't read the one shot as I'm hoping I'm one day gonna be a player in that and not have spoilers, but other than that great progress this month!
The characters sound fun and diverse and you got a lot done in terms of rekt content/mechanics
- Wed Jul 02, 2025 6:59 pm
- Forum: Forum games
- Topic: Corrupt a wish
- Replies: 39
- Views: 311
Re: Corrupt a wish
Granted, you are now so confident that you only have to put one line on the paper and consider it the best drawing ever. You write "the" and are convinced it's gonna be a bestseller. Therefore, as soon as you start something you already consider it finished, happily pat yourself on the back, and ...
- Wed Jul 02, 2025 6:48 pm
- Forum: Monthly Dev Log
- Topic: REKT Devlog: June 2025
- Replies: 9
- Views: 89
Re: REKT Devlog: June 2025
Yes, I've read it, except the big table at the beginningish which I took as a "come back here if you don't know a term but you can skip it now"
The example at the hotel was wonderful, just enough battle played out to give a sense of how it goes and then quickly switching to a summary instead of the ...
The example at the hotel was wonderful, just enough battle played out to give a sense of how it goes and then quickly switching to a summary instead of the ...
- Wed Jul 02, 2025 1:10 pm
- Forum: Monthly Dev Log
- Topic: REKT Devlog: June 2025
- Replies: 9
- Views: 89
Re: REKT Devlog: June 2025
This devlog is fun to see, that's a lot of progress this month.
Great first chapter, I think it can really draw people in
- Sat Jun 28, 2025 11:46 am
- Forum: Projects
- Topic: Hekx' Chinese
- Replies: 4
- Views: 65
Re: Hekx' Chinese
Some other things I do to practice:
listen to a prerecorded chinese audio file with one little earbud on repeat on my way to work. I go by bike, one earbud means I can still hear traffic perfectly fine and on repeat means I don't have to listen attentively when traffic requires more, because it ...
listen to a prerecorded chinese audio file with one little earbud on repeat on my way to work. I go by bike, one earbud means I can still hear traffic perfectly fine and on repeat means I don't have to listen attentively when traffic requires more, because it ...
- Sat Jun 28, 2025 11:42 am
- Forum: REKT: 3152
- Topic: Tutorial / Introduction Ideas and Brainstorming
- Replies: 3
- Views: 52
Re: Tutorial / Introduction Ideas and Brainstorming
That scenario indeed seems like a fun introduction mission!
- Mon Jun 16, 2025 7:23 pm
- Forum: Forum games
- Topic: Instructions unclear
- Replies: 8
- Views: 67
Re: Instructions unclear
Instructions unclear. The cat is sitting in the box the new bath arrived in.
Read a book
- Sun Jun 15, 2025 6:43 am
- Forum: Forum games
- Topic: Corrupt a wish
- Replies: 39
- Views: 311
Re: Corrupt a wish
Granted. It seems like every day you're at the vet because your cat has eaten *something*. Glass shards, rat poison, dog poo, infectious worms, plastic,...
I wish dragons were real