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"Your life can only get better from here," he said simply. […] not having the faintest idea how wrong the road would prove him.
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- Fri Apr 03, 2026 8:04 pm
- Forum: Projects
- Topic: The Miren Discussion Thread
- Replies: 21
- Views: 270
Re: The Miren Discussion Thread
- Sat Mar 21, 2026 7:49 am
- Forum: Projects
- Topic: The Miren Discussion Thread
- Replies: 21
- Views: 270
- Sun Mar 08, 2026 11:52 pm
- Forum: Projects
- Topic: The Miren Discussion Thread
- Replies: 21
- Views: 270
Re: The Miren Discussion Thread
I mean that my suspicion that Everet is half human isn't substantiated, not that your writing isn't. That's working very well.
- Wed Mar 04, 2026 4:31 am
- Forum: Projects
- Topic: The Miren Discussion Thread
- Replies: 21
- Views: 270
Re: The Miren Discussion Thread
Mostly just the way he reacted to her speaking in public. It's not very substantiated.
- Tue Mar 03, 2026 3:41 am
- Forum: Projects
- Topic: The Miren Discussion Thread
- Replies: 21
- Views: 270
Re: The Miren Discussion Thread
For a moment I was wondering if Everet might be half-human, but I suppose it's a little too early for that kind of thing.
- Wed Feb 25, 2026 7:19 am
- Forum: Projects
- Topic: Nar's Fantasy Setting
- Replies: 8
- Views: 141
Re: Nar's Fantasy Setting
A week of long days and longer nights laboring over the forge had left Athame red-eyed and weary. But the weapon she had made was just what she and Janatl had planned so long ago, never quite believing it would be needed.
The oversized pair of shears had something of a sword in them, despite their ...
The oversized pair of shears had something of a sword in them, despite their ...
- Mon Feb 16, 2026 7:44 am
- Forum: Trigger's Projects
- Topic: Ironwood
- Replies: 40
- Views: 282
Re: Ironwood
"You can be anything," they said, "except a Charger."
Little did they know I would be a kerbal.
- Sat Nov 08, 2025 6:50 am
- Forum: Stories
- Topic: Cryo Crate Conundrum
- Replies: 2
- Views: 35
Re: Cryo Crate Conundrum
Hell yeah, Tal words.
The Scapula - a repurposed Oberon-class freighter - was headed to dock at Feldspar Station in only 30 minutes. When docking was successful, their corvette would definitely be noticed and fired upon by the Feldspar if they tried to escape, which meant a tight schedule ...
The Scapula - a repurposed Oberon-class freighter - was headed to dock at Feldspar Station in only 30 minutes. When docking was successful, their corvette would definitely be noticed and fired upon by the Feldspar if they tried to escape, which meant a tight schedule ...
- Tue Oct 21, 2025 12:02 am
- Forum: Trigger's Projects
- Topic: Ironwood
- Replies: 40
- Views: 282
- Sun Sep 21, 2025 8:06 pm
- Forum: Projects
- Topic: Nar's Fantasy Setting
- Replies: 8
- Views: 141
Re: Nar's Fantasy Setting
Is this meant to be part of a short story or a longer novel? If it would be a novel, it seems to be going very quick, but it might be fine depending on what else all needs to go in there. I'm not bothered by it at this point but I can see it becoming too fast if this keeps up (i.e. "nobody has ...